Analysis of
previous
students’
work
Jade Upton
Lois Bryant
WWW- I really like the camera shots displayed
and there is a clear narrative shown within the
opening scene. T...
Pierre Web
WWW- I really like the audio in
the beginning of this clip. The
music is clear and the dialogue
is well spoken ...
Megan Cooper
WWW- The shot types in this clip are really varied. It shows close ups, extreme close ups, establishing shots...
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Previous Students

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Published on: Mar 4, 2016
Published in: Education      
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Transcripts - Previous Students

  • 1. Analysis of previous students’ work Jade Upton
  • 2. Lois Bryant WWW- I really like the camera shots displayed and there is a clear narrative shown within the opening scene. The lighting was dark which made the opening more edgy and freaky almost. The close up shots of the hands and feet have a really nice effect to them and adds edge to the scene. EBI- Although i really like this opening, i feel as though the audio could be improved so you don’t hear fuzzy audio in the background of the dialogue. I also feel as though the opening could have been a little faster and get to the point a bit quicker.
  • 3. Pierre Web WWW- I really like the audio in the beginning of this clip. The music is clear and the dialogue is well spoken and crisp. I like the use of different shot types, for example the shot in the car mirror and over the shoulder shot of the boy walking to the thugs. The close up of the tools scraping together creates a creepy effect that will intrigue an audience. EBI- One of the only things i didn't like about this opening was the fact it's a little bit jumpy. The audio randomly ends halfway through with the title being shown, which creates the idea the clip is finished. However, it then continues which i thought was a bit unprofessional almost.
  • 4. Megan Cooper WWW- The shot types in this clip are really varied. It shows close ups, extreme close ups, establishing shots and many more. The audio is good and can be heard really well, the dialogue is well pronounced. The clip portrays the storyline well, although i could see how it could be confusing. The lighting really reflects the mood of the scenes. EBI- I think the clip shows too much of the story, an opening should be brief but exciting, so i think they could have maybe taken a more dramatic approach.