Narritive writing its great!!
Published on: Mar 3, 2016
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How Jaime Stopped the Rain. of course JAIME!
How Jaime Stopped the Rain. Jaime suh 2012.3.12 of course JAIME!
Setting: Where?Wonderful Greece
Main Charcter• Jaime- A brave young girl, who saves the Earth from nasty, mean Zaraca.
Character Zaraca small version.• Zaraca- A mean bad giant, who kills people Big with a lot of greedy version even if tricks. it dosen’t look big..
Supporting Characters• Claire, Erin, Dana- Jaime’s friends. They are very brave and they all have special powers.They save the world with Jaime.
Supporting Characters Claire• Claire, Erin, Dana- Jaime’s friends. They are very brave and they all have special powers.They save the world with Jaime.
Supporting Characters Erin Claire• Claire, Erin, Dana- Jaime’s friends. They are very brave and they all have special powers.They save the world with Jaime.
Supporting Characters Dana Erin Claire• Claire, Erin, Dana- Jaime’s friends. They are very brave and they all have special powers.They save the world with Jaime.
Rising!• Long long time ago, in ancient Grecce there was a girl named Jaime who was born to be brave with everything. When she was at forth grade, she had a trouble starting at burning summer time. The Sun started to rise down purposely by someone. Then suddenly one drop of rain drip to Jaime’s nose.
Climax• A moment later, thousands of white sharp rain drops fell from the sky. Then when the time passed like cheeta, the rain didn’t stop utill it ﬁlled wonderful Greece in to a dirty ocaen with nothing on ground all ﬂoating sadly on the sea. Jaime couldn’t see people unhappy like ths anymore and decided to kill Zaraca with her friends.
Still Climax......• Jaime and her friends decied to make a strong rope like rock that will stay on the mighty cloud. They throw it to the mighty cloud which looked to tired to live on the sky. A moment later, when they safely came up the mighty cloud, they suddenly heared a great ROAR!~ which was so loud that all the Earth shaked. When they ran quickly to the place where he sound was, they saw Zaraca with red bloody eyes.
Resting [kind of..] Then suddenly when Jaime asked if they could be Zaraca’s slave Zaracalaughed like a tunder and said “I’m so happy that somebody obey me!” Ha Ha! But! after you be my slave you have to get a test which is from the riddler.
Resting [perfectly]• When they reached where the riddler was, the ﬁrst thing they heard was a riddler. The riddler was “Jenny is her ﬁrst name. What is her last name?” They think for a moment then shouted What and got a ticket of the slave. When they give the ticket to Zaraca, he made them in to a slave. Jaime and the three friends asked him if they could go to a party place for a party. Again Zaraca smiled and say yes. When they reach the place, suddenly when a litte light came in to view, he shouted “You little nasty brast!I will never forget this!” Then he burned up.
CLAIRE DANAJAIMEEnd-The waters dried happly as the plants eat and Greece became beautiful again.